55- Word Stories

Yes yes, I have given in to these as well! So here I go!

Love is Blind
She was unconscious. Man in dark coat picked her up. Woke up. Isolated hut! Snowed around six feet deep. Afraid, she tried to run. Biting cold brought her back. Got to know the man living alone….. Fell in love. Ten years later. Still married. He is still HIV+. She is not. Still love each other.

Like a Hot Dentist?
Nervous she entered the dentist’s. Hottie came out. Invited her in. Sat in the dental chair. Batting eyelids. Heaving bosom. Closeness. Appointment took three hours. She was under anesthetic. Did not feel any pain! Kissed. Departed. Twas heavenly.Did not notice the swelling. Did not notice the six missing REAL gold crowns. The missing degree!

kaush Sep 20th 2005 09:32 pm The Muse 28 Comments Trackback URI Comments RSS

28 Responses to “55- Word Stories”

  1. Vickyon 20 Sep 2005 at 11:53 pm link comment

    hi Kaush…

    can i have the gold again ?

  2. Vickyon 20 Sep 2005 at 11:54 pm link comment

    hi…can i have the gold again..? hehe

  3. Vickyon 20 Sep 2005 at 11:57 pm link comment

    first one is cute, love transcends all.

    and second one is - LOL….u ll scare ppl more…and they wont go to dentists…

  4. Vickyon 20 Sep 2005 at 11:59 pm link comment

    i think there is something wrong with this comment page. i have to comment everything twice to make it appear once.

    story 1 - very cute. love transcends all.

    story 2 - LOL…u r gonna scare ppl more, and they r not gonna visit dentists again…hehe

  5. Ricky2Kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:08 am link comment

    Oh I was coming to your blog only, to say that you have been tagged but you already have got the message…:-)

    Visit http://seventeentomatoes.rediffblogs.com/ anyways…:-)

  6. Ricky2Kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:11 am link comment

    Your comment box ate my comment…:-(

    I actually came to your blog to say that you have been tagged but you obviously got the message…:-)

    Anyways, Visit http://seventeentomatoes.rediffblogs.com/ too

  7. Ricky2Kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:11 am link comment

    Your comment box ate my comment…:-(

    I actually came to your blog to say that you have been tagged but you obviously got the message…:-)

    Anyways, Visit http://seventeentomatoes.rediffblogs.com/ too

  8. Ricky2Kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:11 am link comment

    Your comment box ate my comment…:-(

    I actually came to your blog to say that you have been tagged but you obviously got the message…:-)

    Anyways, Visit http://seventeentomatoes.rediffblogs.com/ too

  9. Ricky2Kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:11 am link comment

    Your comment box ate my comment…:-(

    I actually came to your blog to say that you have been tagged but you obviously got the message…:-)

    Anyways, Visit http://seventeentomatoes.rediffblogs.com/ too

  10. Ricky2Kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:12 am link comment

    Your comment box ate my comment…:-(

    I actually came to your blog to say that you have been tagged but you obviously got the message…:-)

    Anyways, Visit http://seventeentomatoes.rediffblogs.com/ too

  11. Hemaon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:27 am link comment

    Hiiiiiii Kaush!!!!

    gotcha:)
    Your new blog looks just so cool!!

  12. Hemaon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:29 am link comment

    Hi Kaush!!!!

    Gotcha…:)

    Your new blog looks so cool just as the name goes!!

  13. hemaon 21 Sep 2005 at 1:32 am link comment

    Hi Kaush!!

    Gotcha…:)
    Your new blog looks so cool just as the name goes!

  14. I Take No Logicon 21 Sep 2005 at 2:43 am link comment

    Story 1 - Do such things about unconditional love ever happen? I doubt it.

    Story 2 - When the story involves a dentist, I’d better not comment… ;)
    Good stuff anyways… :)

  15. ankson 21 Sep 2005 at 3:10 am link comment

    so u caught the bug too!!!

    well, some dentists are bad….. like mine, who cut my tounge!! :(
    the story makes me all the more wary of dentists…..

  16. Prasadon 21 Sep 2005 at 5:34 am link comment

    hmm.. 55-word thing.. everyone has become an expert at this..
    and kaush.. the stories r good.. and I say should tht the theme for both r from ur life… i mean love and dentistry.. smart work :)

  17. Ashtrixon 21 Sep 2005 at 5:41 am link comment

    Ok .so here you are !! Chupp ke baithe ho and all that. :-).

    Read your OLD blog ;-) and followed the cue here.

    Wah your 55ers are heart touching. Loved the first. The second .. quite quite wicked … in being romantic. :-)).

    Will be back for more.

  18. divyaon 21 Sep 2005 at 8:00 am link comment

    hey more 55er’s……
    so u finally post ur 55 words….liked it.
    chal gotta go…..cya later!!:)
    Divs
    PS: u gotta do smthg abt vicky gettin the gold all the time!;)

  19. NEetieon 21 Sep 2005 at 9:03 am link comment

    HEy Ricky…comment didnt eat ur comment..but u spammed…hehe..

    1st is nice..

    and 2nd is scary…

    ans ANKS..the doctor cut your tounge :((

    i didnt visit any dentist..aur ab yeh sunne ke baad to bilkul nahi :(
    take care

  20. Deepak Jeswalon 21 Sep 2005 at 10:03 am link comment

    ASHTRIX - arre sirji, samjha karo - Vicky - a doc, Kaushi - a dentist, now u know the link / raaz for his getting gold he he he … (Now do i see someone back home fuming :P ) ha ha

    KAUSHI - great yaar, mazaa aa gaya…the second one was chilling… and heaving bosoms LOL - u taking inspirations eh ?

  21. Deepak Jeswalon 21 Sep 2005 at 10:09 am link comment

    Oh u’ve been blogging so regularly, bata toh deti..i thought u were in the ‘two months off’ waala period ;-))

    Where is the shoutbox/c-box???

    Read comments on prev posts as well …

  22. Ricky2Kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 10:22 am link comment

    Oops…Sorry but your comment box is weird…belcul aap pe gaya hain…ha ha

  23. kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 8:16 pm link comment

    @VICKY—-haha okay okay..fine! you can have the gold.since this one was fair and square! and yes yes love transcends all doesnt it..but it would take someone with a lot of will to be in a relationship decribed in the story. the second one just came to mind and LOL…jab mere jaisi dentist ho to koi scare nahi hoga!

    @RICKY yes yes..actually I had not seen the tag on your post ..but now i have! :) and I dont know why the comment box gave you and vicky a problem! but thanks for tagging!

    @ HEMA hey there!!! welcome to my new blog! keep comingggg…..its not as cool as yours…:):)

  24. kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 8:21 pm link comment

    @ITNL–hey! well such things could happen if there is unconditional love..although agreed that in todays world it is highly doubtful! and loji! you can always comment on a dentist isshtory! would love to hear!
    thanks for liking anyway :)
    @ANKS—yes yes I did catch the bug! kya karen..blogsville is such a contagious place! and MY GOD your dentist cut your tongue? HOW did that happen? u sure that was a dentist? did you check? urrgh! haha in that case though you shouldnt have read this story! ;)here is a tag for you…do write your 55er ANKS!

    @PRASAD—thanks prasadji for liking them and yes every one has been writing these stories..how about you write one..here i am tagging you…PRASAD!! we need your 55er now..

  25. kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 8:26 pm link comment

    @ASHTRIX–aaiye aaiye aap aaye bahaar aai! waise bhi you are one of the most least visiting visitors! the busy bee that you are! but its always great to see you and have your comments ashishji! and thanks for liking the stories..not as good as yours though!

    @DIVYA–thanks girl for liking my 55er. and yes! i need to do somehting about vicky getting the gold all the time! next time…I IM you okay? and we dont let him get it!

    @NEETIE—-kyaaaaaaaaaa you have not visited a dentist? yeh galat baat hui!!!! but trust me this was a “story” dentists are not that bad..although I cant believe Anks’s dentist cut her tongue! thats scary now!

  26. kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 8:31 pm link comment

    @DEEPAK — now remind me why you are my friend at ALL again?? **fuming with lots and lots of glares*** but err ahem..ummmm you might not be all that wrong…;-)) oh and why the heck does this guy keep getting golds I dont understand either!!! **straight face**
    and LOL the heaving bosom part! haha i knew youd say that..but what can i say….talent brushes off! cant blame me for that ;)
    AND YES i have been blogging..aap toh kitne busy busy ho! never even left offliners and I am still angry about that! But hope things are well for you? and check my comments on the previous posts as well..thanks for readin thru them! but i still dont know why I am friends with you! ;-)

  27. RSon 22 Sep 2005 at 9:45 am link comment

    hey guys…kaush and dj- im glad i was able to teach you guys SOMETHING @ ‘heaving bosoms’…hehehe…carry on the good work.

  28. kaushon 22 Sep 2005 at 4:53 pm link comment

    LOL RS ROFL!and if you mention that…we are good learners arent we ;)

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