55- Word Stories - Part 2!

I could not resist posting another one…so here is the third one of my 55-word stories…

Love’s Verdict

She loves me. She loves me not. Shall be confirmed tomorrow.
Verdict: She loves me not.
I love her? I love her not! I hate her? I hate her not?
I walk to her house. I walk out without her.
Verdict: Life imprisonment.
No death sentence? they ask…
I murdered her. They findeth her not.

kaush Sep 21st 2005 09:08 pm The Muse 17 Comments Trackback URI Comments RSS

17 Responses to “55- Word Stories - Part 2!”

  1. Ricky2Kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 10:23 pm link comment

    You have gone 55-word crazy…ha ha. Lemme just leave my stamp right now. No time to read at this moment…:-)

  2. Deepak Jeswalon 21 Sep 2005 at 11:32 pm link comment

    Me second :D

    Hmmm, scary story…kya chakkar why is everyone writing about murders in 55 story tales ?:P

  3. kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 11:34 pm link comment

    haha RICKY ya maybe i have.but honestly, i am quite enjoying writing these 55ers. Do come back and read for the real gold! :)

  4. kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 11:39 pm link comment

    okay okay DEEPAK yes you get the second place! the silver is all yours! and LOL to make an impact in 55 words, one needs to have murder! hehehhe..you like it naa? ;)

  5. Vickyon 21 Sep 2005 at 11:40 pm link comment

    another one ?
    gurl, looks like the bug has bitten u severely.
    and this one is reallly “cruel”.
    hmmm..the sweet girl does have an “evil” head…hehe…

  6. Vickyon 21 Sep 2005 at 11:42 pm link comment

    and now according to ur own rules, since Ricky has not commented , should the gold be passed on …DJ should get the gold and I should get the silver.

  7. kaushon 21 Sep 2005 at 11:59 pm link comment

    @VICKY— awww yes! the bug bit me..but I swear this was the last one! yes yes i know it was cruel…but hota hai hota hai…:) see I am being “versatile” that way **wink**
    and ahem err ummm…eeee.no comments on the “actual gold” part :)

  8. Ashtrixon 22 Sep 2005 at 12:13 am link comment

    Arre wah !! Another chiller. Kya baat hai 55ers being belted around everywhere.

    This is the best of your 3, for sure.

  9. kaushon 22 Sep 2005 at 12:15 am link comment

    arre wah Ashtrix is here!!! and hey thanks for liking it….yep am living up to the name naa..chiller allright ;) waise I dont know how i can write such scary ones..just flowed..the devil in me is waking up i guess ;)

  10. redon 22 Sep 2005 at 2:17 am link comment

    hi kaush,liked ur pinky chilled place:) getting cold.hhhhhuhhuh

  11. Ricky2Kaushon 22 Sep 2005 at 3:59 am link comment

    Your stories are now linked…:-)

  12. priyanginion 22 Sep 2005 at 4:08 am link comment

    but I findeth you. Finally. Hey really cool template, literally. btw I have posted my 55 bit stories too. do come and have a peek. Also, quite a few new posts are up.

  13. I Take No Logicon 22 Sep 2005 at 4:09 am link comment

    Never knew 55 words were enough to describe a love story and a murder…

    BTW did u check out my 55 words?

  14. divyaon 22 Sep 2005 at 5:48 am link comment

    again a good one……the best of the three in my opinion…..:)
    TC!!!

  15. Prasadon 22 Sep 2005 at 9:13 am link comment

    hmm… another one.. this time a murder mystery.. nice.. :)

  16. kaushon 22 Sep 2005 at 4:57 pm link comment

    hello Redji! aaapkko bahot bada welcome hai yaha par! thanks for liking it and do keep coming!!!

    Hey Ricky thanks!!! I am honored!

    Priyangini!!! aaaiye aaiye! thanks for liking the template..its cool just like me hehe..yup surely running to your 55ers now! and catching up! :)

  17. kaushon 22 Sep 2005 at 4:58 pm link comment

    @ITNL—yep isnt it fun?? love and death all in 55 words! and have not checked your s out right now..but am doing so right now!

    @DIVYA — hey thanks divya!~ arent we all into murders now? ;)
    @PRASAD—-yes Prasad and LOL this is not a theme from my life..haha..how are you?

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