55- Word Stories – Part 2!

I could not resist posting another one…so here is the third one of my 55-word stories…

Love’s Verdict

She loves me. She loves me not. Shall be confirmed tomorrow.
Verdict: She loves me not.
I love her? I love her not! I hate her? I hate her not?
I walk to her house. I walk out without her.
Verdict: Life imprisonment.
No death sentence? they ask…
I murdered her. They findeth her not.

17 Responses to “55- Word Stories – Part 2!”

  1. Ricky2Kaush says:

    You have gone 55-word crazy…ha ha. Lemme just leave my stamp right now. No time to read at this moment…:-)

  2. Deepak Jeswal says:

    Me second :D

    Hmmm, scary story…kya chakkar why is everyone writing about murders in 55 story tales ?:P

  3. kaush says:

    haha RICKY ya maybe i have.but honestly, i am quite enjoying writing these 55ers. Do come back and read for the real gold! :)

  4. kaush says:

    okay okay DEEPAK yes you get the second place! the silver is all yours! and LOL to make an impact in 55 words, one needs to have murder! hehehhe..you like it naa? ;)

  5. Vicky says:

    another one ?
    gurl, looks like the bug has bitten u severely.
    and this one is reallly “cruel”.
    hmmm..the sweet girl does have an “evil” head…hehe…

  6. Vicky says:

    and now according to ur own rules, since Ricky has not commented , should the gold be passed on …DJ should get the gold and I should get the silver.

  7. kaush says:

    @VICKY— awww yes! the bug bit me..but I swear this was the last one! yes yes i know it was cruel…but hota hai hota hai…:) see I am being “versatile” that way **wink**
    and ahem err ummm…eeee.no comments on the “actual gold” part :)

  8. Ashtrix says:

    Arre wah !! Another chiller. Kya baat hai 55ers being belted around everywhere.

    This is the best of your 3, for sure.

  9. kaush says:

    arre wah Ashtrix is here!!! and hey thanks for liking it….yep am living up to the name naa..chiller allright ;) waise I dont know how i can write such scary ones..just flowed..the devil in me is waking up i guess ;)

  10. red says:

    hi kaush,liked ur pinky chilled place:) getting cold.hhhhhuhhuh

  11. Ricky2Kaush says:

    Your stories are now linked…:-)

  12. priyangini says:

    but I findeth you. Finally. Hey really cool template, literally. btw I have posted my 55 bit stories too. do come and have a peek. Also, quite a few new posts are up.

  13. Never knew 55 words were enough to describe a love story and a murder…

    BTW did u check out my 55 words?

  14. divya says:

    again a good one……the best of the three in my opinion…..:)
    TC!!!

  15. Prasad says:

    hmm… another one.. this time a murder mystery.. nice.. :)

  16. kaush says:

    hello Redji! aaapkko bahot bada welcome hai yaha par! thanks for liking it and do keep coming!!!

    Hey Ricky thanks!!! I am honored!

    Priyangini!!! aaaiye aaiye! thanks for liking the template..its cool just like me hehe..yup surely running to your 55ers now! and catching up! :)

  17. kaush says:

    @ITNL—yep isnt it fun?? love and death all in 55 words! and have not checked your s out right now..but am doing so right now!

    @DIVYA — hey thanks divya!~ arent we all into murders now? ;)

    @PRASAD—-yes Prasad and LOL this is not a theme from my life..haha..how are you?

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